A friend can only critisize,
but still if you make mistakes so better apologize,
he shares our JOYS,
it's GIRLS or BOYS,
he helps in times of SORROWS,
it's time of LENDS or BORROWS,
he helps in STUDIES,
and helps to compete with intelligent BUDDIES,
Can you give other CLUES,
it's OK if not , but these are my VIEWS.
8 comments:
hey dats d 1st colourful n nice blog dat ive read u knw........ ur sis writes all dat borin n long stuff wid no colours...... u seem 2 b bettr dan her so all d best wid blogging...... hope u njoy bbye tc :)
cute poem motiiiii..expectin more of them ;)
oh my god ure awesome!...im almost 21 and i still suck at writing poems! :P
wonder wht i was doin when i was 11...umm..i guess playin in the mud (even eating some!)..wid the other kiddiesss.. :P
keep up the good work!!!..now tht uve started, try and be more regular at it..k? ;)
@Archit: hey thanks for your encouragement..
@Didi: thanks,i will surely work hard to write poems
@Ace: it is ok & thanks or even you can take help from me
ur alwayz welcum...... so wenz d nxt post cumin???
@:archit i have already written
@archit i have already written
hey i dint read dat.... m jst goin through it.... will write a comment on dat 1.....
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